From a Survivor
The pact that we made was the ordinary pact
of men and women in those days
I don’t know who we thought we were
that our personalities
could resist the failures of the race
Lucky or unlucky, we didn’t know
the race had failures of that order
and that we were going to share them
Like everyone else, we thought of ourselves as special
Your body is as vivid to me
as it ever was: even more
since my feeling for it is clearer:
I know what it could and could not do
it is no longer
the body of a god
or anything with power over my life
Next year it would have been 20 years
and you are wastefully dead
who might have made the leap
we talked, too late, of making
which I live now
not as a leap
but a succession of brief, amazing moments
each one making possible the next
Theme(s)
- Marriage
- Loss
- Death
- Divorce
- Love
- Survival
Poetic Techniques
- Enjambment
- Metaphor
Symbolism
Tone + Mood
- Pensive
- Sombre
- Hope towards the future
Imagery
- “body of a god”
- “your body”, “as vivid to me”
Rhyme + Structure
- 24 line poem
- 10 stanzas
- no rhyme scheme
Quotes
- “Like everybody else, we thought of ourselves as special”
- “but a succession of brief, amazing movements”